Increasing divorce rate
Some people consider that rising rate of divorce between spouses and family breakdowns have
become an stark omen that family today more susceptible to face a problem than pas time. In this
essay, I personally contend that uncertainty change of the world recently affect how people interact
with family member. It is a undeniable fact that family used to has more intensive communication and
conversation each other, nonetheless it has been different now.
One primary reason influenced the family condition hitherto is the existence of internet and social
media outbreak massively spreading around the world. By that circumstances, instead of having one-
on-one contact to others, people presently prefer focusing on their gadgets, checking every single
chat and notification popped up. This time-consuming habit has diminished deliberately the
interconnection between not only wife and husband, but also parents and children. Moreover,
Youtube, twitter, Instragam, Facebook, television and other apps installed has imminently revamped
family meeting situation and affected people to become careless as to real life condition.
More importantly, An infrequent talk, which caused by online activity such as gaming, watching video
and chatting, between family members at home also contribute to the divorce rate. Posting and
sharing their feeling on social media is now the first thing to do rather than talk directly if wife or
husband face household issue.
To evade such problem, limiting internet time and reducing social media activity is the considerable
solution, and also talking and discussing more frequently to the family. By doing so, high rate of family
breakdown can be reduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... has more intensive communication and conversation each other, nonetheless it has been dif...
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... the existence of internet and social media outbreak massively spreading around the...
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... their gadgets, checking every single chat and notification popped up. This time-c...
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...tivity such as gaming, watching video and chatting, between family members at hom...
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...ily. By doing so, high rate of family breakdown can be reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7519379845 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83392447624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7022867304 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944896021943 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367700216022 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607940643441 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0287042872665 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07070411687 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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