Declining Education Standard
There is a widely held perception that the falling educational standard in literacy and numeracy areas
is a great importance issue today. This essay will discuss the problem into solution then come to a
reasoned conclusion.
In the modern school a teacher only let out the students natural ability to learn on themselves. They
only give some tasks and let the pupil to find out. This is an unhealthy education system which is the
minimum interaction between teacher and student. It will affected to the students that they can
override teacher advice and inattention of learning process. For instance, if the pupil can find out so
many information by themselves from search engine without discuss it with their teacher. It should be
some miss direction and lack of knowledge.
Moreover, the communication between teacher and student should be build. Literacy and
mathematics subject can be one of the example subject that will force their interaction. Therefore,
these subject is important for the actives class. Such as literacy can build the sense of creativity and
empathy then mathematics will increasing the level of analysis. Furthermore, these aptitude is
valuable to use in daily life. While the school curriculum has made for students to facing the real
world. It is good to train the pupil to be more carefully for the information that they got.
In conclusion, modern education method should be maintain the interaction between student and
teacher. Restore the literacy habit and mathematical analysis to practice their empathy must be build
in their environment. However, parents, teacher and government must be work together because
they are the most important elements to rise a better student.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...andard in literacy and numeracy areas is a great importance issue today. This es...
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... ability to learn on themselves. They only give some tasks and let the pupil to fi...
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...healthy education system which is the minimum interaction between teacher and student...
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Suggestion: affect
...on between teacher and student. It will affected to the students that they can overrid...
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...ffected to the students that they can override teacher advice and inattention of learn...
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Suggestion: to process
...cher advice and inattention of learning process. For instance, if the pupil can find ou...
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...nstance, if the pupil can find out so many information by themselves from search e...
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Suggestion: much; little
...nstance, if the pupil can find out so many information by themselves from search e...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...nstance, if the pupil can find out so many information by themselves from search engine withou...
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...s it with their teacher. It should be some miss direction and lack of knowledge. ...
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Suggestion: Mathematics
...student should be build. Literacy and mathematics subject can be one of the example subje...
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Suggestion: Empathy
...can build the sense of creativity and empathy then mathematics will increasing the le...
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Suggestion: increase
...ity and empathy then mathematics will increasing the level of analysis. Furthermore, the...
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Message: Did you mean 'this aptitude' or 'these aptitudes'?
Suggestion: this aptitude; these aptitudes
...ing the level of analysis. Furthermore, these aptitude is valuable to use in daily life. Whi...
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Suggestion: maintained
...sion, modern education method should be maintain the interaction between student and t...
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... practice their empathy must be build in their environment. However, parents, te...
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...ernment must be work together because they are the most important elements to rise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39636363636 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77390437012 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2088595896 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0654216137181 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224020177836 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541794542684 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233087667254 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613785965946 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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