Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Pre school are good for young children to develope their skills and learning, despite this more parents think that leaving their child with grandparents feel more securely. This essay will include both points of view about the topic and my personal opinion.
Firstly, childcare centres are important in a child learning developement journey,they learn how to become more independent away from their own families members, how to socialize and interact with other children in an different environment. Therefore lots of parents choose to send the children to the nursury/pre-school from early age, although from age of 3 they have government support and pre schools are very important before reception. not only they get to know other children they can could be in the class but also they become more confident and independent.
Secondly some parents think that leaving their child with grandparents they feel more securely in their own home environment therefore less distress on departure leaving for work and the parent feels more content. The other benefit could be that they get one to one time where at nursery the ratio adult to child could be one to three therefore less attention, however they know that nursery are safe and eventually they will send their child to pre schools.
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Suggestion: , they
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6701677697 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6464788845 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.571428571 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270762435905 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129266901359 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639334623486 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195752583919 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440722587298 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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