Society comprises of various elements, living and nonliving. Many of these elements exists in the form of law and order, basic set of rules of society and others in living form such as humans, animal and nature. For proper functioning if the society it is vital to find the right balance between them. This motive, of a prosperous society, can be only achieved with proper interaction between the elements of the society itself. There are certain parameters which define the well-being of a society but the most paramount of them is the questionnaire put forward by the people. This will be analyzed in the following paragraphs.
For first, a society is considered in good health if all of its elements are living in harmony with each other. As everyone is aware that a society contains people belonging to different sex, race, ethnicity and religions. Based on these classifications they may possess very different moral values. Moreover, despite differences in moral values an ideal society will continue to flourish until they do not encroach others ideology and rights. Consider for example, that a Hindu might have certain ideology that do not matches with a Muslim. But one should keep themselves asking that they are no one to render others ideology wrong.
Secondly, the responsibilities in society are designated to individuals with specific fields coming under their jurisdiction. For example, Administrative services are meant to implement policies properly. On the other hand, politicians are assigned the job of framing policies those are in welfare of the public. Even after having specific responsibilities, these diverse departments need to co-ordinate for the proper functioning of the society. Assume, for example, that politician who does not interact with its people would not be able to know the ground issues faced by public. In such case, the people should themselves approach the administration or the politicians itself to ensure they get the solution of their problems.
Last but not the least, questioning the authority does not mean that they should question the intention of the administration. In fact, there may be situations where leaders or guardians may have better understanding of the problems and a feasible solution too. A good example to this would be a student in a high school. If that student is not able to understand some of its core subject, he may ask his teacher to change his stream. But it is his/her teacher who understands his caliber and will advise him the best possible solution to the problem irrespective of student’s observation.
So, in may opinion it is always good to participate in the affairs of the society and keep and keep a close watch on the governing body by questioning them from time to time. The well-being of a society is proportional to interest of its people in reform amendments.
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 50
- Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals. 50
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 50
- Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance. 83
- “Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places” 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
Society comprises of various elements, living and nonliving....
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'match'?
Suggestion: match
...might have certain ideology that do not matches with a Muslim. But one should keep them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11489361702 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96333716179 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5149565585 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.16 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164169326775 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463002202162 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405980562942 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090297365654 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307096107254 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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