Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive
development?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that local shops in cities and town replaced by large shopping malls. There is widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life.
However, I do not entirely accept this and will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. Mostpreponderant one is that people still do not get all accessories in the bigmalls and that only available in the local market but also lead to numerousother benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages itoffers, not only one benefit more when it comes to beginning effectively, but theycan enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, asfar as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned proposition isthat it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when only one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, this learning such attributes as dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparentwhy many are in favor of small shops in town instead of large malls.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one canconclude that the benefits of small shops are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is will lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely acce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09663865546 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18510952323 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5152006211 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.625 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146348041116 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660138424507 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107596014944 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112061180026 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767240909946 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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