The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first map illustrates the present Islip town center and second portray the development plan.
Altogether, there will be more spots in the new town center. besides, some location will undergo demolition and replacement.
Presently, the town center has huge housing in the middle and south. Furthermore, there's the main road which runs from west to east and has shops along with it on either side. Moreover, there is a school and an enormous park which are connected to the main road by two divergences in the west and east. Further, there is the countryside beyond the main road.
According to the plan, a huge dual carriageway will be constructed causing the removal of the countryside and some part of the park. In addition, there will also be a pedestrians only pathway which replaces the main road and will have old shops along with it. However, the shops which were situated in the north of the previous main road will get replaced by a bus station, a big shopping center, a car park, and new housing. similarly, the former housing will get split into two sections and new housing right along the park. though, the school and park are kept at the same spot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...nd second portray the development plan. Altogether, there will be more spots in ...
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Suggestion: Besides
...l be more spots in the new town center. besides, some location will undergo demolition ...
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Suggestion: there's
...g in the middle and south. Furthermore, theres the main road which runs from west to e...
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Suggestion:
...s the countryside beyond the main road. According to the plan, a huge dual carri...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a pedestrian' or simply 'pedestrians'?
Suggestion: a pedestrian; pedestrians
...e park. In addition, there will also be a pedestrians only pathway which replaces the main ro...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...ng center, a car park, and new housing. similarly, the former housing will get split into...
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Suggestion: Though
...s and new housing right along the park. though, the school and park are kept at the sa...
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Suggestion:
...ool and park are kept at the same spot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78921568627 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48402721315 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553921568627 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8651170784 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834011572393 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365242034543 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375813798339 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679539996164 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471887252535 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.