The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrate the life-cycle of a fish species from its first stage (egg) to the final one when the salmon become an adult.
The first life form of a salmon life is the egg and this stage happens in the River. once the young salmon emerge from eggs they are reared to the freshwater through the estuary. The salmon growth an maturation happens in the ocean but before that the young fish has to migrate to the rearing areas. once the reach the ocean here they start the growing stage of their life-cycle. when a salmon become an adult it is ready to spawn and generate new life. this happens only after that the adult salmon travel to the spawning areas where the incubation phase has been carried out and a new life born.
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- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the life-cycle of a fish species from i...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
...gg and this stage happens in the River. once the young salmon emerge from eggs they ...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gg and this stage happens in the River. once the young salmon emerge from eggs they ...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... through the estuary. The salmon growth an maturation happens in the ocean but bef...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
...sh has to migrate to the rearing areas. once the reach the ocean here they start the...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sh has to migrate to the rearing areas. once the reach the ocean here they start the...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... the growing stage of their life-cycle. when a salmon become an adult it is ready to...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...s ready to spawn and generate new life. this happens only after that the adult salmo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 600.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05552552531 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5087019966 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7142857143 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256805370176 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126573378064 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688062531808 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234867770924 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034828889059 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.