Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which one would you prefer?
For many people, choosing an employer is an important thing which not only affect their life quality but also influence future career. Lots of graduates are hesitant of whether choosing big company or not. I tend to believe that every coin has its two sides, it has own merits and demerits. The important thing is to find the most appropriate one.
Firstly, many graduates who just leave university tend to have position in a small company. Obviously, new employees have more chance to promote to a higher office within a short term, since there are less competitions in a small company. Also, some people prefer to work in small company because of the lower pressure and less workload. However for those people who full of initiative, small companies just tie them up and hinder their further road to higher position, because an unknown company is impossible to provide big project or platform for its workers.
Secondly, lots of people dream to work in a famous company. The main reason for this is they believe it can provide more opportunities for development such as formal training or having international travels. Most of large company tend to train new workers before they enter. A truth is that acquiring new knowledge is beneficial not only for the employees, but also for the workplace. But working for a big company also means high pressure. Workers competitive against with competent peers every moment. They may feel anxious and depressed if they can’t get big project. That is the main reason for why many people quit office from big company.
To summarize, the important is to find your own style of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun competitions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ce within a short term, since there are less competitions in a small company. Also, ...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...f the lower pressure and less workload. However for those people who full of initiative...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94927536232 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56671126566 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0095145422 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297915419091 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871757110045 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767224968939 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147465732228 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834747511905 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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