smoking in public places should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
it is well known that, smoking is injurious to health, and people smoke on their own choice. smoking is complete a personal act that cause health issues for both smoker and people around him. therefore, in my opinion, it should be complete banned in public places.
Despite, the negative impact of smoking on public health, it is not completely banned in world due to some economic reasons. For instance, it generate a large amount of tax, jobs and custome duties for any government. due to these financial benefit, if governament does not want to bann it completely, however it should be prohibited in public places because of its negative impact on health. Further, prohibitation of smoking in public places will develop perception of non smoking environment that will result in less smoking. A study published last year highlighted that passive smoking is more dangerous than smoking itself, therefore baneing it in public place will decrease the negative outcome of passive smoking.
smoking in public is very tempting act for young children, who are in age of learning and adopting things from their environment, and they start smoking to show off among their piers. smoking in public is directly polluting environment, so banning it will decrease the enviromental pollution especially air pollution.
In conclusion, there are some economical benefits involved with smoking for governments however it should be prohibited in public by law to decrease its negative impact on public health and environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: generates
...some economic reasons. For instance, it generate a large amount of tax, jobs and custome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30165289256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78610780377 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2750190379 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.636363636 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276507781823 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118442843206 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594079279102 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182248057351 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401751791172 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.