You are interesting in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university Write a letter to inquire about the course In your letter explain which course you are interested in tell what you what to know about the university explain why you

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You are interesting in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university.Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter:

explain which course you are interested in

tell what you what to know about the university

explain why you would receive the scholarship

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter with regards to the scholarship program offered by your university. I was really glad to learn about the scholarship being offered and I am looking forward to submit my application to avail a scholarship.

I am a computer science graduate and I have decided to take up the computer science subject as my major subject for my higher education. In addition, I have studied various computer programming languages from my high school days.

I always admire the popularity of the university because of its rank holders. This time I am aiming to get a university rank myself and I would love to get graduated from your university.

Based on my previous merit scores and attached recommendation letters, I would like you to consider granting me a full scholarship. This will help me concentrate only on my studies rather than spending more time by doing part time jobs in order to clear my educational loan.

I am looking forward to hear a positive response from you.

Best regards,

Ragav

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hip program offered by your university. I was really glad to learn about the scho...
^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to submitting'.
Suggestion: to submitting
... being offered and I am looking forward to submit my application to avail a scholarship. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pplication to avail a scholarship. I am a computer science graduate and I ha...
^
Line 15, column 222, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...rather than spending more time by doing part time jobs in order to clear my educational l...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...tional loan. I am looking forward to hear a positive response from you. Best...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97237569061 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89762019632 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1344366541 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153653613161 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605536003392 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512971117555 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880916631347 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640925204635 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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