Today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. Discuss the causes of rising
unemployment among young adults and suggest any solutions.
The youth unemployment crisis is becoming a real puzzle in modern society. Nowadays more and more school leaver are unable to find a job in their specialization.
The first thing to mention, as one of its major cause, it is the financial crisis. In financial crisis the enterprises have to cut down on scale of operation and not recruit employees. It makes it harder for young people, who already inexperience, to find a job .But the cause of the youth unemployment not only come from the labor market but also from the laborer themselves. New graduates tend to be too self-confident and think that they must have such a high salary beyond the benefit they bring to the enterprise. They lack a lot of necessary skill but are frustrated with low-paying job and cannot find suitable jobs. The underlying reason of this cause is the poor connection between the things taught at school and when applied to work. Last but not least is the unequal distribution of jobs. Many careers do not have enough skillful worker but many career is labor surplus. It comes from the lack of labor market research and the right orientation from parents
Because the financial crisis cannot be change overnight, the employees need to change themselves. Begin with constantly learning not only the professional knowledge but also in life skills. High school student and people at pre-university level must consider carefully whether going to college or not and the suitable majors.
In conclusion,The youth unemployment crisis is caused by financial , overconfident and life skill lacking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86810720861 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7546573896 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133776855535 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462636698421 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745293283477 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878535869757 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721517873671 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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