Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change.
Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.
The current warming change trend is of particular significance because of most of it likely to be a result of human activity since the mid 20th century. it is argued that climate change needs to be tackled by the government while politicians have urged individuals to make changes to their lifestyle. I shall agree that the government and individuals should take roles and solve the problem together.
Two main reasons threats to earth are air pollution and waste. carbon footprint, fossil fuel are released from industrial parks, vehicles to the air which endangered to the ozone layer, rivers, oceans.
reducing greenhouse gas emissions should be a top priority in remaining factors because of its effect most to the atmosphere. The government could introduce policies to limit industrial waste or impose the factory to use renewable energy sources such as wind, solar, tidal energy. In this way, it also enhances local inhabitants’ cognition to reduce car emissions by using more public transportation. Increasing the number of trees in the city not only absorbs the carbon dioxide was released but also provides the fresh air for people, the more tree planted, the less negative consequence of the environment.
authorities should take strict measures against the amount of garbage through to rivers, sidewalks and promote more environmental campaigns reducing deforestation, global warming. For instance, in the earth day, doing something by collecting litters, recycling, enhancing people’s cognition, cleaning rivers. Moreover, the government should enact policy and promote the process of landfills in classifying and recycling glass as much as possible such as plastic, glass, and paper.
In conclusion, climate change is a global issue so that individuals need to take responsibility for it in particular and authorities in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Carbon
...s to earth are air pollution and waste. carbon footprint, fossil fuel are released fro...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reducing
...o the ozone layer, rivers, oceans. reducing greenhouse gas emissions should be a to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Authorities
...ve consequence of the environment. authorities should take strict measures against the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54895104895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03312155994 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.851672173 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163490345029 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05520927495 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632756547453 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875302745349 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803017359398 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.