Some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another.
There is no doubt that the world wide web, or the internet, is the piece of technology that has revolutionized the entire world. Some people think that advancing on the internet generally bridges the gap in the relationship that we are possible to chat with someone half a world.
In recent decades, most people have no longer been able to rely on letters or pigeon for communication. Thanks to the internet tool that we can send and receive messages to everyone straight away with the cost and time at least. For instance, in the digital age, communicating throughout E-mail or Facebook is faster than it used to be a snail connection with letters.
Besides, the development of the internet helps people quickly to connect with another one who lives in a remote area or far distance more often. If we have a friend who is studying abroad where is half the world, you can keep in touch them every day through social media by sending photos, "voice chatting" which are the most prominent with today's youth generation. Moreover, it also a supportive tool for you in finding old friends that you have not seen them for ten years in just seconds.
Besides, dating and other social sites are a booming section of the internet, that allows you to find new friends, lovers, even your spouse for life by dating apps. In terms of marriage, many countries have been reducing the state of being single thanks to the internet connection in comparison with the last decades.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that the internet has positively influenced personal relationships in many ways, not only communication, even in many aspects of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, second, so, at least, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88692579505 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70008136659 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.617492645 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.727272727 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263182812652 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980167594485 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491807438157 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140222379011 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565426798918 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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