There is a common saying that music is the food of the soul. There are many different souls out there and resultly various types of music tastes. Listening to a song or an instrument that you like gives you the plesure you desire and need. The kind of music we listen can change with our mood and satisfy us in those time periods. Thus, in my pointof view music is significant to many people and I would like to explain the building blocks of my idea in this essay.
First and foremost, if we investigate the history and evolution of music, we can easily see that new kinds of musics, instruments, lyrics show up in years. The understanding of good songs changes for many and remains the same for the others maybe. But why is that so important? because, we listening music can provide stronger feelings and we listen to them when we are happy, sad, energetic, in pain, nervous, crying and so on. For instance, when we want to do sports or we are at gym, we put very fast, cheering songs in order to fasten our body and catch the rhythm or when we feel down, we try to listen to enjoyable, fun songs to boost our moral. there are a lot of kinds of music and we can pick whichever we prefer.
Another thing that makes music vital to us is that it helps us to focus on to the tasks, duties, work or else when it is hard since We live in a stresful world. The calming effect of music is also proven by scientist and this speciality is only one of them. Because, when a person is relief, then he/she can work or study more efficiently and makes less mistakes hence, they can save their time and energy to the other self improving things. I also love to study with music and personally I feel more successful when I listen to the songs that gives me joy.
Latsly, the music is exist just because we like it, we do not need any reason to listen to it. The only thing matters is when we listen to a music is that our willing. Eager to listen to or make music is coming from inside it is an unstopable condition. Furthermore, this is the main notion that there are many kinds of music and songs. Moreover, there are many singers and all of them their own way to sing songs or play instruments.
As a conclusion, the explanations that I mentioned above are creates the importance of music and I believe that everyone can enlarge these statements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, another thing, for instance, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32045454545 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34656311892 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506818181818 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7531906411 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9523809524 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216568219261 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782580955967 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415996396063 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127374596026 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053656003705 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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