Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary, What's your opinion?
It is irrefutable that unemployment rate is increasing day-by-day in many nations. Some masses ponder that, pupils should get only pre-level education, while others opine that secondary education is mandatory. In my opinion, I believe that secondary education is necessary for getting job.
The most obvious reason is that, in today's competitive era, children not only compete with next door child, but also compete with small global village because of globalisation. As a result, to get employment in any sector, child has need high qualification as compare to his competitor. The another reason is that, secondary education level provides many things to students which are very beneficial in their life. To elaborate, as secondary level students are more mature as compare to primary level students, they can learn so many things from their peers as well as tutors, such as communication skill, team work and many more.
Furthermore, secondary education is necessary because, it opens many doors for getting job in the society. It is fact that, if the students get more education, they have more opportunity in various sector to admit for job. For example, many jobs in the market need secondary education, they do not allowed people who have only primary education, like in India, if people want to get class-3 level job in government sector, they should passed out at least secondary level.
In conclusion, I believe that to stand in competitive era and earn handsome amount of money as compare to others who had only primary education, children should take secondary education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ildren should take secondary education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2421875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77716518853 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9292370267 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299711946731 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121012522665 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582344682337 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194119481284 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067705089404 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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