In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
Masses, nowadays, are lured into purchasing the items from an edifice shopping mall or centres rather than a little local shop, which is irrefutable veracity; moreover, this movement extending the abysmal development in our country.
The first and foremost impact is on the destitute people, who are not getting an opportunity to establish. As the public is attracted towards the luxurious shopping mall, small shops are not getting their revenue as required and gradually tend to close. These little shops are often run by poor people, who do not have enough fortune to occupy a shop inside a humongous mall and solely depend on the local customers. Consequently, we are getting unaware of domestic product, which does not only possess our authentic culture but also sometimes outweigh than the product getting sold in supermarkets. Vegetables, for example, in the local market, are fresher than supermarkets', which usually kept in a fridge to serve more durability.
Another important aspect is, nowadays, individuals have to travel far distances for shopping as they don't have one nearby, which is costing a lot of of time in the modern bustling metropolis and leading to an inundate crowd in shopping malls. Hence these accentuate malls' aesthetic getting mar, and people are losing interest in shopping malls. For an adult, for instance, who works in a 9 to 5 job, it is a tedious task to do regular vegetable shopping in current crowded traffic, as it will take the entire morning to shop his daily needs and leads to less productivity both in personal and professional life.
To conclude, the movement of local people towards the gigantic shopping centres, besides getting a small shop close also leads to impact daily routine work. Before it is getting late, the government and the public should carry out significant steps to restrict the outcome from future eventualities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...avel far distances for shopping as they dont have one nearby, which is costing a lot...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...have one nearby, which is costing a lot of of time in the modern bustling metropolis ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dern bustling metropolis and leading to an inundate crowd in shopping malls. Hence these ac...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...to an inundate crowd in shopping malls. Hence these accentuate malls aesthetic gettin...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...lt, for instance, who works in a 9 to 5 job, it is a tedious task to do regular veg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73616939442 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4262567488 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.454545455 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276165265626 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107621498072 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873969289368 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169357550404 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220480611806 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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