Communication technology is being innovated for to help out the people around the world to communicate freely to each other. Now communication technology is even develop more for people.So,they can share even more things such as photos, videos and even organised events with people.but, Due to free and open nature of technology it advantages outweigh disadvantages.
To begin with, , their are advantages of commutation technology. Firstly, it could help people to communicate with their family, friends or even use this for their business. for instance, we chat and whats app are few to mention . we can use this to know about what they do recently and even see them over the video call.it would be useful for students and businessman to research about their topics and to search about markets of local and international.secondly its useful for poor families by just connected WiFi to contact others through many apps by doing this hey can save money and time.
On the other hand,some people prefer to misuse this this technology for their person gains by affecting others. however it's important for users to educate more themselves to knew about their do's and don't over the social media.Some studies shows that such cases are happen where people post their social number or account details carelessly on the social media.So, they have to use it smartly.
In a nut shell,I would like to say communication technology would we useful for us if use it smartly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07851239669 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90336095541 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.210207849 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.555555556 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115344590402 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615349956115 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322086733331 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687166966436 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376760329229 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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