You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Zoo is famous for its popularity and recreation. While some people agree that zoos would provide an inhabitation to save some endangered animals, I would argue that zoos should be shut down for some reasons.
On the one hand, a large numbers of people believe that zoos are an excellent habitats . Many species are in danger of extinction. It is undeniable that zoos are the good place for this animals to live with the protection by trained staff. To illustrate, back to few years ago, panda became under a real threat of being extinct but now they are in safety by zoos. Besides, deforestation are happening in many countries. For example, in this year,Amazon rainforest has burnt which causes to many creatures’ death and a lack of animals’ land. By these reasons, zoos would be the safe environment to prevent the animals from forest fire and forest devastating consequences.
On the other hand, it is argued that the zoos should be closed down. This problem can be attributed to a host of reason . Although it is truth that some animals which being risk of intimidation by human attack should be saved, other species which are not in category also need the freedom to live in the wild life. While this kind of animal are using for education and entertaining activities, however, animals are not meant to be caged and their distress are seem to be happened every day in the zoos. If we consider zoos as saved places for animals, it could be done for another environment such as wild life or natural parks and so on. It will be the best place for the animals to have freedom.
In conclusion, while some people think that zoos are animals’ residence, I believe that zoos should be stopped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'habitat'?
Suggestion: habitat
...ople believe that zoos are an excellent habitats . Many species are in danger of extinct...
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Suggestion: .
...ieve that zoos are an excellent habitats . Many species are in danger of extinctio...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...niable that zoos are the good place for this animals to live with the protection by ...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...n by trained staff. To illustrate, back to few years ago, panda became under a rea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ago, panda became under a real threat of being extinct but now they are in safety...
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Suggestion: , Amazon
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Suggestion:
...s; land. By these reasons, zoos would be the safe environment to prevent the anim...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...eant to be caged and their distress are seem to be happened every day in the zoos. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79124579125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70445544627 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.603669764 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286730764611 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106195403416 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872665168329 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203485836636 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587567165738 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.