Cultural heritage stands for things that have been passed on from earlier generations to the present generation and old buildings are one of them. As the time passes away, the need for renovation of these premises incline. Although it has been a debatable issue among society whether money should be spent in restoration of old buildings, a bunch of people believe that government should invest in providing commodities to people and developing the road system because refurbishment of ancient structures draw away a huge amount of money. This essay will discuss why the repairing of historical buildings is important.
Two main reasons are behind the need of refurbishment of ancient buildings. Firstly, these premises play an important role in order to attract tourists, therefore helping the economic growth of a country. However, if proper fixing of these buildings will not be done, these will not be popular among tourists. For instance, last year Indian government announced that 84% of national as well as international tourists scheduled their visit to historical buildings which increased about 17% of the nation revenue. Thus, repairing of such premises is worth doing as these structures act as good tourists spots.
In addition, being the source of evidences regarding the cultural heritage and history of a particular region, these buildings act as a great source of education for the visitors, especially school going children. The history is published in the different forms in the buildings like boards hanging on the walls, books, et cetera. For example, many schools visit these architectures along with their students in order to widen their horizon in the field of history and culture of a specific region. That is why; restoration of these buildings is prominent.
In conclusion, this essay argued why repairing of old structures is important. In my opinion, the renovation of ancient properties to be very much crucial because they are a great source of income to nation as well as education to the children: two most important assets nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24397590361 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83531345624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7698254243 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13530670133 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431775183083 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469842078803 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800778396859 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052263418499 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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