Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?
Parents play a vital role in the growth of the children's life. In order to attain successful career parents should invest their time in helping children in their studies. I completely agree with this phenomenon as it builds a very sound relationship amonst family members and also parents become friends of their kids. In this essay i will explain the reasons why more time should be spent in helping children in their homework.
To embark on, parents are the first point of contact for any child and they give family values to their kids. It is indeed true that parents can make a child's career brighter by focusing on the basics since beginning. In other words, if parents are helping their children in home work then it cultivates not only trust between them but a strong foundation for future. In addition, it definitely improves thinking and memory of a child. As a result, higher grades can be anticipated. Every child starts to learn from home and eventually by spending time in study will develop social skills as well as an appropriate behavior.
Another reason is that homework also encourages children to use time effectively as parents create conditions in which they have to perform the task. Moreover, it helps a child to learn independently and take responsibility for their work in the presence of parents. Hence, parents involvement reduces absenteeism, enhance confidence and improves student's achievements.
To conclude, it is necessary to get indulged in students education as ongoing involvement serves the positive development. I believe parents should give their precious time to their children helping them in work after school irrespective of other works such as office commitments and household chores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18439716312 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77903799189 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9274804257 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419804281866 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122000025919 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109202237662 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248973527099 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118943314546 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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