Modern communications mean that it's no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, writing letters is not really need to use as a form of communication. People can use different modern technology to communicate to others. This essay will argue that modern communication will totally necessary as a form of communication compared to writing letters.
In this new generation there are a lot of modern gadgets that is very useful to communicate but there are people who traditionally used writing letters as of this generation. Writing letters is a formal way of communication. People do this today because it reminds them the event happened to them many years ago. They will write a letter if they invite someone on a date,birthdays or other occasions. As for them they can save money and electricity because they will only need a paper and pen. Old ages usually do this thing and most of them are living in countryside and writing letters to others is very meaningful to them.
On the other hand, modern gadgets is the best way to communicate to each other. The first thing that people can save is time. Modern technology is the fastest way to communicate. People can use their mobile phones, laptop and computers if they want to talk to their loved ones, friends and families. It can also use to business, work and in school. They do not have to use a paper and pen to message the person they want to talk and can use it wherever they go.
To conclude, writing letters was the formal way of sending message to others and it reminds them the traditional way of communication. Living in new era whereas modern technology is develop and this is the better way of communicating to others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , birthdays
... letter if they invite someone on a date,birthdays or other occasions. As for them they ca...
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Line 13, column 183, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...in new era whereas modern technology is develop and this is the better way of communica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, whereas, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74911660777 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7989211707 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445229681979 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2719538252 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0588235294 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137737226322 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547761571689 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521318612495 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10446010926 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059351469067 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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