Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion
There is a fact that music can bond various cultures and their people, both young and old. To a certain point of view, I think that some events like sport might contribute to bringing people together. However, I also believe that in the heart of these events, music plays a significant role, making them more pleasant. Accordingly, a couple of reasons will be discussed in this essay.
Admittedly, there are various ways of bringing people around the world together, such as sports events. In events like the world cup and Olympics, people from different nationalities gather together in a particular country of the global world and participate in competitive games. Nonetheless,they sing songs and enjoy spending time with foreigners and what makes these events more attractive and favorable is music.
Music is considered to be a universal and common language. When it is played, various age groups of individuals from disparate cultures seem to savour it, repeating the lyrics without knowing the meanings and dancing with the rhythms. Also, it breaks the age boundary as elderlies and youngster appear to listen to a common type of it. Examples can be seen on dance floors, including people with different age groups dancing and singing together. Moreover, the majority of experts believe that by relieving stress and anxiety, music can be used as a treatment for several diseases even when patients can not understand the language of that. Hence, it is logical to declare that music contributes to positive impacts as well as bonding society members together.
In conclusion, although events like the world cup and Olympics are one way of bringing people together, the only one which makes these convocations enjoyable is music.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-01 | Saahaar | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-10 | Azizat Gilmeyeva | 56 | view |
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. 78
- The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. How far do you agree with this prediction? 84
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school How far do you agree with this proposal How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language 87
- Pollution of rivers, lakes, and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible cause of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...cipate in competitive games. Nonetheless,they sing songs and enjoy spending time with...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17021276596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73641478893 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1027379594 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27632909686 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886246434176 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058374947699 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166018163181 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123036462037 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.