Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Numerous people nowadays prefer to choose to be self-employed than working for a company or other kind of organisations. One reason for this is people's personality, namely persons do not want to obey to anyone. So they prefer to run their own business. It is a normal situation, because every person has a chance to be independent.
To begin with, there are some reasons why people decide to be self-employed. Firstly, not all people like to serve for others. They prefer to start a new job independently instead of it. For example, some managers are always strict and they like offering any kind of work as well as yelling because of negligible things. In consequence, most workers cannot tolerate this kind of situations and give their work up. Then, those workers may start their personal business. Furthermore, some people are eager to create new thing or they are willing to be leader. This kind of persons do not always want to do others' work. Because they are arrogant and they know that they have a potential and opportunity to deal with any kind of jobs independently. Undoubtedly, these are not sole reasons why people choose to be self-employed but these are more important than others.
However, some disadvantages are also available of being self-employed. For instance, if all people are self-employed, it will have negative effects on companies. As, in companies the number of workers may be declined as a result of increasing of self-employers and it will be very harmful for organisations. Moreover, there may be some conflicts between companies and self-employed persons to sell own products for example. It is also bad for both of them.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits to be self-employed, people should think about other aspects, too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... negligible things. In consequence, most workers cannot tolerate this kind of sit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86885245902 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70950232491 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518032786885 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8353577018 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.65 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426325264218 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143198715437 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138113100874 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295272705437 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793804547283 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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