A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Different mind thinks differently, yet we can not afford to ignore them. Colleges are individual institutions following their own curriculum, and generally most of them are similar to a certain standard, one way or another. Different cultures emphasize on different aspects and need of certain skills in their society and designs curriculum in their way. Though all nations do not employ same curriculum, it is generally considered that only great minds of a nation design national study curriculum.
If students of a nation are forced to follow only a certain study curriculum, then any diversity in study will not be presented there. It has a chance to become an ill competition among them. Every student holds a possibility to shine in a curriculum they prefers. Every nation needs a student force, those are educated in diverse ways to move forward, because internationalization is an important part of an education system.
If a certain national curriculum is employed until college level, then the education board will not have sufficient data to measure if their curriculum is maintaining standard or not, meaning they will not be sure about the changes to be made in their curriculum. This is because they will not have any student of their nationality studying in other curriculum, to compare with. This may lead to major drawback. For example, holding back the education system of that nation for years.
Though following a same curriculum nationwide until reaching the college may bring the positivity that every student of the nation will be marked with equality according to their knowledge. It may even help make things easier for the nation's education board. For example, conducting only a single entrance exam will be sufficient for college entrance for nationwide students. Still it is not worth it because different colleges posses different entrance criteria.
And lastly, a nation's curriculum may not be standard or competitive enough to pursue college level studies in other countries. If such things happen, then a nation's all students may slip a major fall.
So, in a word, though following a single curriculum until the college may bring some positivity for nationwide students, ultimately it deserts more. To bring fully eshtablishment of a diverse and competive study nationwide, differe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'prefer'
Suggestion: prefer
...ssibility to shine in a curriculum they prefers. Every nation needs a student force, th...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... system of that nation for years. Though following a same curriculum nationwide ...
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Line 13, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ay even help make things easier for the nations education board. For example, conductin...
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Line 13, column 377, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...llege entrance for nationwide students. Still it is not worth it because different co...
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Line 17, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...t entrance criteria. And lastly, a nations curriculum may not be standard or compe...
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Line 17, column 156, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
... countries. If such things happen, then a nations all students may slip a major fall. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, may, so, still, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30458221024 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92421402661 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4961665267 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315676847303 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108098184111 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103228278093 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183636019039 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613127049732 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.