Some people claim that what people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. critics say that these countries should change their died. what your opinion?
some western countries is believed having the less nutrition diets that cause the consumers are more likely to achieve enormous negative benefits such as an overweight. this leads a must for those countries to improve the quality of their diets especially for the hygiene and the nutritional content.
it is commonly seen in the western countries such as in U.S is that the society are more likely to consume fast-food since it is served quickly even though they realize that it is unhealthy diet. Although the food sometimes contains saturated fats and malnutrition which can negatively affect the healthiness, those people still prefer to order the fast-food as the viable solution in a busy time. this results in majority people suffering an overweight. In the Southern California, it was recorded in 2018 that the growing number of American with overweight problems increased by 30% due to unhealthy diets they often consume. If it is regularly happened, there are more following negative effects they probably suffer such as the decrease of heart and brain function.
is any feasible solution to solve this problem? many criticism have arisen that the stakeholders in those countries should take a responsibility to change their unhealthy diets. One of the reasonable ways is the improving nutrition content and ensuring the cleanliness by controlling strictly the kinds of food sold in those countries. For instance, in Finland, the government shows their chiefly concern for their society diets by breaking into a complicated procedural step that give for considerable concern on the nutrition content before issuing the permit policy to be produced. The other ways is that changing their daily consumption into natural diets such fruit and vegetables.
In conclusion, unhealthy food is in great demand in this era especially in some western countries, and it drives many severe impacts for health. Therefore, it is necessary to take control of the daily diets quality and change it into the nutritious food to avoid all the health-related disease. The preventive steps are better rather than treatment efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34023668639 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82061764471 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2321757713 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222612659443 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729857331665 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689201954029 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132829036939 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393735712291 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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