Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Children spend more time with their parents in childhood, which helps to learn their culture, language and behaviors. Thus, parents have all the responsibility of their children in their growing age. This essay will discuss why parent’s responsibility will affect to their child behavior and how to affect these children for society.
In this rapidly evolving era, most of children are growing with their grand parent or servants because parents have busy schedule of their daily routing. On the other hand, more and more children were living alone whilst they adapt what they see. According to this, thought we can’t expect parents to present their children all day but they should take care of every action of their child.
However in the growing age they were following their parent behavior whether they want to aware of the positive and negative side of child because a person’s behavior depends upon his family environment. In present, violence, crime and bulling are increasing day by day thus, non -responsibilities of parents were affected for these convicts.
Children are the reflection of their parents. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement because in this technological world parents should give more time to their children and focus on their every action thus, they will give a well behavioral person to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...ociety. In this rapidly evolving era, most of children are growing with their grand parent or ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... care of every action of their child. However in the growing age they were following ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...havioral person to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28636363636 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67308284586 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7632447827 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322047348821 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154719560308 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543733301449 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214606982563 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06248376421 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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