Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should be do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Does u agree or disagree?
There is an opinion about wheter some of lawbreakers should not be sent to the jailhouse when they commit crime. I agree that in some cases, prison may not be the best solution and community service would probably have more benefits.
The reason why I agree with the opinion about put the lawbreakers in jailhouse is one justification given for prisons is to keep society safe by removing criminals from the outside world. so the first thing to consider is if the lawbreakers are toxic and dangerous for people. For example in the case of violent crime, sexual crime, bullying which give direct effect to the victims lawbreakers should be keep in jailhouse.
On the other hand, in case of possession drugs for example which does not involve violence against other people so the lawbreakers does not present a direct danger to people. keeping this types of crime in jailhouse is too expensive and does not appear to be an effective punishment as they often commit the same crime again when they come out of prison. A further reason not to put these people in prison is that they may mix with more dangerous and violent criminals, potentially committing a worse crime when they are released. By keeping them in the community, helping others, they not only learn new skills, but they could also develop more empathy and care towards others. if this occurs, society can only benefit.
To sum up, putting criminals who are not a danger to society in prison is expensive and, in my opinion, ineffective, both as a deterrent and as a form of rehabilitation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the lawbreakers') or simply say ''some lawbreakers''.
Suggestion: some of the lawbreakers; some lawbreakers
There is an opinion about wheter some of lawbreakers should not be sent to the jailhouse whe...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...oving criminals from the outside world. so the first thing to consider is if the l...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'kept'?
Suggestion: kept
...ct to the victims lawbreakers should be keep in jailhouse. On the other hand, i...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
... not present a direct danger to people. keeping this types of crime in jailhouse is too...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...p more empathy and care towards others. if this occurs, society can only benefit. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, for example, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82156133829 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60097686213 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.394785839 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213552053021 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773630104407 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525695076715 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129647492421 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591758931352 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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