A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Erick,
Thank you for saying yes to my request to take care of my house and the pert while I'm out for vacation. In this letter, I am sending you some details of the house and a few tips about pet-care as this will be your first time with a dog. I am certain that these tips will make your life easy while you are at my place. I will make sure that I am always reachable on my cellphone throughout the holiday. Feel free to call my cell, in case you need any information.
You know my pet Robb very well, so he will be friendly. I feed him twice a day, and both the meals will be available in ready to eat cans. Kitchen has a special cupboard with Rob written on it, so you will get his feed cans in that cupboard. Additionally, you would have to take him to the park in the evening for a round. Please make sure he is chained when you are taking him out.
As I will be out for only 2 days so there won't be much on the household side for you to take care of. There is plenty of food in the refrigerator for you. The only favor required here would be to keep trashcans just outside the lawn on Friday night, as garbage van comes for collection in the early morning every Saturday.
I would like to thank you again for taking this up for me!
With regards,
Harinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ake care of my house and the pert while Im out for vacation. In this letter, I am ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12252964427 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14308723207 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2877527059 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253463784193 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941827645638 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636848938045 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154879164796 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593570635293 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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