it's difficult to maintenance the balance between work and other aspects of life such as family and leisure time, what is your opinion to keep it balanced.
Recently, the phenomenon of maintaining the balance between work and different aspects of life and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of family time is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that permanent job can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, leisure time can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that lifestyle, as well as leisure activities, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student I performed some an academic experiment which discovered full-time work. Thus, beneficial ramification of both n and n apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, keeping balance between work and life might increase the consequences of experienced workers. Moreover, fundamental aspects of work space relate to this reality that the demerits of free time pertain to working condition. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of social life is correlated negatively with working a lot. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of having free time.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides,I profoundly believe that the benefits of spending time with family far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of work atmosphere prove the significance of spending a lot of time, but also pinpoint the implications of a workaholic person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...veral compelling arguments on both sides,I profoundly believe that the benefits of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37878787879 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12106271708 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8768532963 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252255050969 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815624298285 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599656483898 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137414366523 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546318138685 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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