Nowadays people show more anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes? How could we improve the situation?
In nowadays society, many people are tending to do anti-social things, for example some people would attack people on public transports like subway for no reason, or disrespect to other people such as teachers, parents as well as people from different culture. In my opinion, there are manifold causes and some solutions that can be adopted.
The most basic reason of why people are more likely to have anti-social behaviors is that the incorrect family education is affecting people’s moral values. As the result of intense competition and the living pressure, many parents are been occupied by work of most of their time, so grandparents are spending more time with children, this kind of intergenerational education often has spoiling problem which might cause immoral values and disrespect others. In the meantime, the negative and violent information also leads to the anti-social behaviors of people. To be more specific, there are a lot of inappropriate online games, for example, GTA5 is that kind of game which advocates violence, people might imitate the immoral behaviors in the game and do harm to other people in the real world. Last but not least, many people can’t find a job in nowadays society, so they might resent society and want to revenge, so the unemployment and poverty are also a vital cause of the problems mentioned above.
These problems can be tackled through effective measures. The very first solution is to share the common social values with the whole society, which might raise people’s legal awareness as well as educate people to be law-abiding citizens. The government should also provide some job training classes to enhance people’s employability and help them to be employed again so that can increase the employment rate of the society. More strict regulations should be taken place to reduce the negative and violence information on the internet.
All in all, there are plenty of reasons why people are having many anti-social behaviors and lack of respect to others is that they have no chance to learn and practice it. But if the whole society could carry out the above actions, these issues can be largely improved.
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| 2019-06-27 | Anas Shaikh | 65 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16806722689 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76349236477 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1991955277 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.923076923 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244116758638 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855751735347 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592332001169 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151381738754 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525720305431 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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