Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and give special courses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, evolution of education received more attention by the general public. Although there are a lot of argument in favor of teaching all children altogether, I personally believe that children with exceptional abilities should be gathered in specialized classes and give them specialized education.
One the one hand, in the principle of many developing countries in educational field, it is extremely important to discover the potential of students, this is help to them have a special place to learn when they receive a wider knowledge of development comprehensively. Firstly, normal lectures will not appeal to outstanding students. This mean is that many students miss out much more opportunities in order to nurture their abilities. For instance, as my primary school, I have graduated for 8 years, I remember that a lot of experience must be applied for children as well students to divided my class into a number of benefit learning groups. A result of this problem is improved in quality for a different abilities of each student. If this not happened, I strongly believed that the children with an lower qualifications increased significantly stressful, anxious, angry,… when those not to catch up with better qualification students.
One the other hand, it could be positive effect for students who have exceptional abilities, the favorable learning environment can be create and extend beyond. Furthermore, the highly competition give them a opportunity to compete with other groups where include many student with a lot of good academic achievement for educational development. By contrast the group with an lower qualification students would be help them to approach in the basic learning methods and improve the level of weaker students.
In conclusion, although, the both methods of teaching students certainly bring positive and negative impacts, but teaching children in second way is more reasonable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43046357616 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12217768698 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3874067078 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186000946159 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654537520624 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674911615314 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127941338051 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712020403415 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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