The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of ménage of owned and hired dwelling in England and Wales in 93-year period, from 1918 to 2011. On the first sight, it is obvious that the percentage of households in rented accommodation took over the owned one during the first approximate 40 years, while the reverse was seen in the later 40 years.
It can be clearly seen from 1918 to 1971, the rate of households in owned home gradually rose over 25% from around over 20% to 50%, which was the switched point of two trends. By contrast, the proportion of rented one was over 75% in 1918, which was triple that of the other, and dramatically decreased to 50% in 1971, in spite of a stable time from 1939 to 1953.
For the next 40-year period later, an opposite movement was occurred. The percentage of owned house strongly grew and reached its peak in 2001, at 70% then slowly fell to 65% in 2011. Vice versa, the rate of hired accommodation had a sharp drop from 1971 to 2001 at the rate of 50% and 30%, respectively; then gained their rise again in 2011, at 35%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, well, while, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50256410256 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40637986129 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6731832911 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158258793399 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757312670528 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558336640849 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113925764437 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649110550973 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.