The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
Overweight has become a more and more serious problem to human society. The illness which cause by overweight such as cardiovascular disease, hypertension and diabetes are also harmful to people's lives. However, what cause people become fatter than the past? This essay will discuss the reasons of it and give some solutions to solve it.
First of all, the main reasons for why people gain weight is because of unhealthy habit on diet. Lots of people like to eat junk food since they are convenient, cheap and delicious. But the high sugar and fat can cause an increase in weight and finally lead to health problem. Secondly, less and less exercise is also one of the causes of obesity. Some people are lazy to do exercise but some are just because they do not have enough time. The truth is, in order to earn more money, people have to sacrifice more time to work, which including time for exercise. Also, with technology development, many work change and people spent more time in front of table, using computer to deal with job which also cause less exercise. Finally, often staying up late can also cause to overweight. There are many reasons for people to stay up late, for example, more and more time be spent in electronic devices which cause less sleeping time.
For measure, it is important to let the people develop good living habits. And sometime it even needs government to publish law to ensure that employees can have enough time to exercise. It is also significant to promote healthy eating habits. Raising the price of junk food and lowering the price of healthy food can hold up the consumption of junk food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 771, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'overweighting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: overweighting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76408450704 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36093846813 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3723148385 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229561613915 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742950902738 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469322347559 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156919371138 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717729051739 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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