some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
it is argued by some that music is the best way of connecting people who do not have similar kind of culture or neither they belong to the same age group. In my opinion, the above statement is completely true and I will be providing reasons for it.
Firstly, music is one of the most widespread artform throughout the world. Many famous musicians have gained popularity worldwide and some have even been honoured with presitigious awards like the noble prize. this is because of their huge fan following covering people of various cultures and all ages. it can be further justified by the crowd gatherings in their concerts and shows. These programmes are held across the globe and generally achieve great succeess alost everywhere. people irrespective of their cultural background or considering how old they are enjoy the ocassion to the full. In this manner, music events bring people together.
Also, music efficiently makes the listener feel relaxed and stress free. With the growing technology music has been provided with better exposure to huge masses. For most of this people, it does the job of giving them a sense of calmness. In this scenario, the barriers of culture and age are widely overcomed. Moreover, the diversity of music can be seen within the musicians. most of the bands are formed simply on the basis of talent and commitment towards music. it is not restricted to people of certain age, religion, background or any thing like that. Therefore, we should be exhorting the widespread love for music.
To conclude, music definitely creates co-operation among people which can be seen from their collective response to music and musicians.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63201134532 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5578799541 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315182095181 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901001162279 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951289031208 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187904254047 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355048944317 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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