Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems
Nowadays, environmental problem has become one of the most concerned issue in the world. While many people believe that the loss of particular plants and animals is the main factor contributed to environment degradation, opposite opinion argue that there are more environmental issues. this essay will outline both perspectives and opine with valid arguments and examples
On the one hand, the reduction of natural species will affect the biodiversity. plants and animals are the two main characters of food chain, which illustrates the flow of energy from one species to another. if one’s quantity falls, the amount of food absorbed by another will plummet drastically. The best example for this is when rhinos are at the edge of extinction, the population of its prey increases dramatically. However, by the rise of number, the prey starves and competes for food and some dies because of hunger. Hence, natural species will be in the edge of extinction if there is no action or measure to improve this situation
On the other hand, I truly believe that there are more serious environmental problems that should be predominantly handled. Our world is experiencing with many environmental issues such as air pollution, water pollution or the waste of plastic. I whole-heartedly agree that these issues are more urgent than the loss of natural species because it is threatening people’s health by leading to various uncurable diseases such as respiration problems. A perfect illustration of these trending issues is in my city, hanoi, is going through an epidemic, which include air pollution and water pollution. Citizens in hanoi are living with worries and consciousness because of the unguaranteed quality of water and air, which contain much toxic chemicals. Unfortunately, there has not been a clear explanation as well as measure implemented to improve this reality.
To conclude, I believe that the biggest environmental problem that we are facing with is not the loss of natural species, but instead, it is the more alarming issue such as pollution and plastic, which are threatening people’s lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32544378698 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04063144519 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4116360347 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233684077651 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744596255857 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763998238711 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154545390754 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639239637097 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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