Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities
such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health,
no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that the medical profession is a very lucrative field, but I disagree that doctors should not delve into money-making plastic surgeries and treatment of rich patients and focus on the patients’ health instead of looking at his pocket. A number of arguments surround my opinion.
To begin with, I would like to say that it takes years to become a doctor and medical education is also very expensive. No doubt, doctors must serve the society, but to serve the poor and needy, first they have to generate their own sources of income. For a doctor, the status of the patient is not important, and he has to treat anyone who comes to him. By rendering his service to the rich, he can provide his help to the weaker sections and thus help society.
Secondly, I would like to add here that cosmetic surgery is also a part of people’s health. They are part of mental health, which is also very important. It is not just the celebrities who go in for such surgeries. People having accidents in which their facial features are affected, also need to go in for such surgeries. Can you imagine a mental status of a woman who has lost her external ears or has dis-figured her nose in an accident?
Finally, there are children born with cleft lip and palate, who also need surgeries. Therefore, it would be wrong to say that doctors should not focus on such surgeries. There are doctors who are doing surgeries absolutely free for cleft lips and palate. They charge their rich patient but never say no to poor and needy ones.
To sum up, a doctor’s duty is to treat patients and there is nothing wrong if he charges money
from those who can afford to pay as long as he is looking after the poor ones too. It would also
be wrong to label all cosmetic surgeries as unnecessary and profitable activities as they are also
part of the health of the patients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12889756943 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54375 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4812729281 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280504423149 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796661428142 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775169792926 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121106539319 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072155411052 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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