A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is surely one of the most important matters in government decisions. A nation should aspire to have a well taught population to improve their quality of life. However, one big problem is of utmost importance: should every student be taught the same? In my opinion, I disagree with such choice because it may do more harm than good for the two following reasons.
Firstly, it is very easy to brainwash a whole generation's thought by imposing some curriculum for them to learn. Take for example a despot that finds himself in power and wants to either to convert or to maintain its whole country in a dictatorial regime. He would surely accomplish this by teaching kids subjects that are beneficial for him. North Korea implements this exact technique to maintain its populace calm and subject to Kim Jong Un's power. He must only keep these children away from the outside world, cutting subjects such as international geography or other languages out of the curriculum.
Additionally, proximity between children and schools allows for the latter to decide better what are the best subjects to teach them. For instance, if a county is struggling with racism or chauvinism, then a school or local authority might know better than a central government on how to tackle this problem. They could add some lectures about equality and feminism in order to develop a stronger tolerance amongst kids. Such decision could not be made by a central authority because it lacks the closeness with its populations specific problems.
However, we should not ignore that some limits as to what can be lectured in schools must be established. For example, countries cannot let their schools decide entirely what to teach as they may end up taking the easiest route and lecturing subjects in order for the children to have good grades. Actions like this can be quite harmful for the population as it creates a generation full of ignorance.
In conclusion, schools should be the ones deciding on what to teach their kids because of their close interconnection and perception of a region's problems and the best course of action to take in order to mitigate these problems. however, even if this responsibility lies in schools, government should also establish some limit and by doing so they avoid the creation of a complacent educational system
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04871794872 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75061286578 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571794871795 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8333333333 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.388888889 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102255679425 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331561946781 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372714663016 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583601518333 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331417714174 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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