Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party
-Why you will not be able to attend
-How you enjoyed working with him/her
-How you will keep contact with him/her
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am truly sorry to inform you that I will not be able to attend your good bye party on Tuesday. Unfortunately, I have been invited to my sister-in-law wedding rehearsal dinner on the same day and my attendance is mandatory as you can guess.
Working with you was one of the best things that happened in my life and I enjoyed every hour that we spent together. You will definitely remain my favorite coworker that I had a pleasure of working with. You will be always remembered not only for your hard-working and responsible attitude in the office but also for your exceptional manner. You were a remarkable role model for me as you taught me how to keep my clam in face of a challenge and never settle down for mediocrity.
We will be in touch through different social media that we both participate in. You also have my phone number so do not hesitate to call me whenever you needed anything. I would be honored to be helpful in any way you see fit. I have created a group in Telegram and added you to the group so that we can arrange get-togethers more efficiently.
Best wishes,
Behnaz Yousefi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am truly sorry to inform you that I wi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tendance is mandatory as you can guess. Working with you was one of the best thi...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...t I had a pleasure of working with. You will be always remembered not only for your hard-worki...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e but also for your exceptional manner. You were a remarkable role model for me as ...
^^^
Line 11, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arrange get-togethers more efficiently. Best wishes, Behnaz Yousefi
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53658536585 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69771533983 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6104651445 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367872285812 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136348554638 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784755236369 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252177038 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366553605202 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.