Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends
they have just sent you some photos of yours holidays.
thank them for the photos and for the holidays
explain why you didn't write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Janani and Ram,
How are you both?I hope this letter finds you well.Although, it's such a short time since we last met,it feels much longer.
Thanks you very much for the marvellous trip that i had with you last month and i am so glad with your warm hospitality.The photos you sent were excellent and still reminds me the cheerful moments we had.The whimsical behaviour of your kids attracted me and also made the trip an unforgettable one.
since i took leave for my office during our trip, i had more pending work and was working overtime all these days.As a result,i didn't find to write to you.And i am sorry for not contacting you these days.
I have ten days of holidays for this year's christmas and i would be very much delighted if you both join me for christmas celebration. this will be a great chance for you to visit my country and meet the rest of my family.Of course, you must stay with us. Mine is a big family with nine members and all of us are expecting you and yours kids.we'll pick you at the airport.I really hope you can make it.Take care and write back soon.
Best regards,
Gayathri.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47317073171 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42804357413 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9391490274 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390576380809 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165141137583 0.0766984524023 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838852846672 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177771935636 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115282693621 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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