Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
Paleo diets, a really good topic to debate on, and I strongly agree with the author's statement, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
Today, in a fast-moving world , we actually left ourselves in terms of health and healthy food. I would not say that every person is responsible for it, but most does. In this race of life, we want everything fast, and believe it or not, whatever we are getting is not even 10 percent of what we should have. Foods - vegetables and fruits - are grown with such chemicals and medicine, to increase the production rate and decreasing the growth time, is not more than a rubbish.
If you shall look around your surrounding, the diseases, which are common today, were not even present in earlier ages. Some would oppose by saying, human ancestors were not having that technology diagnosing such diseases, but I will defend this point by analyzing average ages of earlier people, you will find it better than ours.
Food is essential and has a very important role in human nature. There is an old saying, "how you and your brain develops depend up on what you eat". Our creator, created our body and for each part he has created some meal or requirements (in terms of minerals, vitamins, protein, carbohydrates, lipids etc.). Deficiency of anything, can lead us to illness in one way or other.
Science proves that major composition of bones are calcium, and intake of calcium is necessary to develop our bones and cartilages. likewise, iron is necessary for blood production and for other needs. Our DNA is designed by our creator in such a way that our body knows what to store and where to store. This can be analyzed through modern science. Therefore, I can totally agree that the animal bones' broth, those animals which are healthy for human body, are very useful to cure or heal human body cartilages and bones as well as nerve regeneration.
With the explanation given above in the essay, I can confidently say, that animal bones' broth can be much helpful to heal our joints, and chondroitin, and can promotes nerve regeneration. However, to prove this statement in a scientific way, and to falsify that this is just a placebo effect, we have modern machinery which can easily picture the changes before and after of any human body. Statistical data analysis tools, can also be helpful to have a better understanding of this argument..
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 428 350
No. of Characters: 1976 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.548 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.617 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.489 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.147 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ebate on, and I strongly agree with the authors statement, ancient humans knew somethin...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sses. Today, in a fast-moving world , we actually left ourselves in terms of ...
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Line 13, column 316, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...mins, protein, carbohydrates, lipids etc.. Deficiency of anything, can lead us to ...
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Line 17, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
...ry to develop our bones and cartilages. likewise, iron is necessary for blood production...
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Line 17, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bones'' or 'bone's'?
Suggestion: bones'; bone's
...re, I can totally agree that the animal bones broth, those animals which are healthy ...
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Line 21, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bones'' or 'bone's'?
Suggestion: bones'; bone's
...say, I can confidently say, that animal bones broth can be much helpful to heal our j...
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Line 21, column 160, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'promote'
Suggestion: promote
...al our joints, and chondroitin, and can promotes nerve regeneration. However, to prove t...
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Line 21, column 222, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a scientific way" with adverb for "scientific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ation. However, to prove this statement in a scientific way, and to falsify that this is just a pla...
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Line 21, column 492, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... a better understanding of this argument..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, likewise, look, really, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 11.1786427146 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 28.8173652695 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 427.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88290398126 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63342187326 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 204.123752495 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578454332553 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 4.96107784431 262% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.67365269461 538% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1485404772 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.736842105 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196804209176 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05370760884 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487435041083 0.0701772020484 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916764551151 0.128457276422 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629842964727 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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