The following argument contains 3 fallacies, which is not substantiated, would contradict the persuasiveness of the argument.
Firstly, the developers of Monroe city stated that building a new jazz club would be a profitable model from a business perspective, merely by just comparing it to a town that is based 65 miles away from Monroe. It is nowhere mentioned in the argument and neither a cogent source has been mentioned which solidifies the fact that people of Monroe are actually interested in Jazz music or even would interested in a club with jazz genre; which is just a moot point if there are no reasonable sources to support the fact what music genre majority of people in the town are actually interested in.
Secondly, the developers have mentioned the fact that there was a profuse gathering of crowd on an event hosted in Monroe, which was hosted by the famous celebrities in Jazz music which were also the residents of Monroe; But this doesn't mean that they actually love the jazz as a music genre, maybe most of the crowd that had gone to see the show were there actually because it was on a weekend or maybe because it was a holiday period going on or there is also a possibility that there no tickets for the event and people only showed up there because the entry was free for the event. No-where it has been mentioned that the people attending the concert were localities of Monroe, there is a certain possibility that the people who had come to see that concert were from outside the town maybe a majority of the crowd was international. It is not even certain that the population of the town could be 2 million out of which 100,000 people showed up which is merely a less number or maybe the population of the town was actually 50,000 and gathering of 100,000 people is a clear indication that attendees of the concert were actually people from outside the town.
Thirdly, the developers state that 'jazz nightly' is the most tuned into radio channel, but it is not enough to come to the conclusion that abundant people of the town actually love jazz music. Maybe the total number of people who tune into radio is merely 10,000 people an out of those only 2,000 people tune into jazz radio, thus making it the highest tuned into the channel. But to consider it as the most popular genre based on a count of 2,000 where the actual population of a town could be in 100,000's is just absurd.
If the developers provided enough substantial sources to support their proposal, it could have been a reliable deal but as they don't have enough information or data to support their proposal shows that they are naive and this investment could, in fact, result into a total blunder.
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- The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe."A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles aw 55
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- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership. 62
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 481 350
No. of Characters: 2185 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.683 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.543 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.459 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.818 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.406 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
... interested in Jazz music or even would interested in a club with jazz genre; which is jus...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...sted in Monroe, which was hosted by the famous celebrities in Jazz music which were also the resid...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... also the residents of Monroe; But this doesnt mean that they actually love the jazz a...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1135, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
... attendees of the concert were actually people from outside the town. Thirdly, the ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d have been a reliable deal but as they dont have enough information or data to supp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.6327345309 178% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 13.6137724551 191% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 479.0 441.139720559 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64300626305 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50825320804 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39248434238 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 705.55239521 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.8473053892 206% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.066483 57.8364921388 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.4 119.503703932 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.9 23.324526521 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.70786347227 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192666583382 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871538029475 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844373394064 0.0701772020484 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102350305756 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821943315028 0.0628817314937 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 14.3799401198 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 12.197005988 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.1389221557 187% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.9071856287 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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