some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree.
In general, people have this notion that parents play an important role in their children's future life depending on how he or she was brought up as a person. This essay agrees to the fact the guardian of children play a vital role in deciding a road path to his future. I will discuss how parents influence juvenile minds at very young age and then i will share few real life examples.
it is commonly believed that character traits of a human being is developed at a very young age, almost as young as a toddler. since parents are the only people who are around this adolescent age, they tend to mold or shape child's behavior for the rest of his life. His likeness and dislike will be influenced by the experiences of his childhood. A recent study by the renowned institution in UK showed that, young ones start to develop a personality behavior as early as 5 years old.The study further showed that most offsprings retained these personalities almost all of their adulthood life.
Caregivers should instill good values and teach good manners to their offspring. since these ethos go a long way in a child's life,one should be mindful around them. it is commonly said, “parents are the first teachers" and it cannot be any truer. We can understand this phenomenon from history. A look back in the past shows us that good parents produced great leaders of the world in the past. Many great leaders of the world were home schooled in their early lives by their parents for instance Winston Churchill.
In conclusion I believe that parent's upbringing play an invaluable role in deciding a child's future path. one should never overlook the care of their young ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74657534247 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58248018084 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3607113357 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19127992604 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579067781987 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580673118464 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111061873815 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350022789041 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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