What is a democracy and how is it different from the dictatorship? Please share your opinion.
The importance of the most discussed topics about governments which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The significant influence of understand the difference between democracy and dictatorship has sparked the controversy over this trend on which one is worse in recent year. It can be agreed that people born in a dictatorship have not much rights than a democracy. Therefore, this essay will elaborate about the meaning of democracy and dictatorship and thus it will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, democracy is where people have voice to the government, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that they can elect their representants in direct elections. As an illustration, all countries in South America have a democracy government. However, it does not mean that are better there than in countries with a dictator.
In another hand, dictatorship is made for one person lead the country, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that population cannot change their dictator, they have to accept this person for as long as it stay in the power. For instance, North Korea still in a dictatorship. Hence, people there might be happy or not, but they are not allowed to leave the country to try a new life overseas because their dictator does not allow it.
In my opinion, a democracy is better, because all citizens can elect whoever their want and it will not stay in the more until dead comes.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that this topic is a quite conspicuous and it is distinguished, although this theme should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stays'?
Suggestion: stays
...to accept this person for as long as it stay in the power. For instance, North Korea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97810218978 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86733130106 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1107107646 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161511074451 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569109152669 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383740372247 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083912257977 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236416607382 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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