In many countries, women no longer feel that need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, women are least interested to get married because they consider themselves financially stable, and can live independently on their own without the support of any male partner. I completely disagree with this notion as this trend has damaging effects on humanity.
First of all, marriage is a wonderful relationship between two persons of opposite sexes to live a meaningful life. It is not about the dependency of a female partner on her male partner just for the sake of money or financial security. Rather, it is the life-long bonding to aid each other in order to carry out daily life activities conveniently and smoothly. Secondly, they share their feelings with each other which helps them to overcome various problems of their life. Therefore, marriage is essential for everybody.
Moreover, this practice of being not married is against the law of nature. To illustrate it, if ladies will not be gotten married then no children will be produced. Consequently, the human race would be at risk of extinction. Thus, in order to save humanity from eradication on this planet, marriage is mandatory. In addition to this, these days, married girls also do jobs and they shoulder the half responsibility of their home expenses with their husbands.
In conclusion, it is evident that living in a legal relationship is vital for human society to thrive and to fulfill mental and physical needs. In my opinion, marriage is a fabulous gift of nature and society to the human race and it should be practiced in a positive way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d to fulfill mental and physical needs. In my opinion, marriage is a fabulous gift...
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Line 13, column 255, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e human race and it should be practiced in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0546875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83036588966 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7114998913 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143448267101 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042911295295 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437612386922 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822642631346 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562604560965 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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