To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A human in the past lead a nomadic life travelling from a place to place without knowing the impact of a place but now in present century human has priorities and data gathering thought in his mind hence ,human try to gather much information by gathering information of the place by studying certain major areas .In my opinion, I strongly believe that its quite important to study the major cities in order to know the main features of a society and the same is explained by providing the two reasons
Firstly, The important fact that culture and language change in the society that is different from region to region , state to state and country to country makes a big problem in people .For instance, two family from Nepal were planning to shift to india due to the flood issue they faced on 2019 September .First family was confused because they were unaware of states and culture of india. hence ,they contacted to their relative who was in india and the relative explained all the states and its culture like west bengal which is famous for food and Sweets and cost of leaving way of celebrating festival and moreover west bengal have many Nepalies who follow festivals like their home town hence they shifted to west bengal where as another family without any research started there life in Mumbai which had difference in culture like they don’t celebrate much of the festivals and its matriachial based family , language problem, Second family faced lot of problem
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- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81496062992 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37823587127 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 127.0 23.0359550562 551% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.5 60.3974514979 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 611.5 118.986275619 514% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 127.0 23.4991977007 540% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 40.5 5.21951772744 776% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834490155798 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639267850677 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00318255425347 0.0758088955206 4% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640448977676 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00997317188775 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.7 14.1392134831 458% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -48.97 48.8420337079 -100% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 51.6 12.1743820225 424% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.29 8.38706741573 158% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.8971910112 445% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.8 11.2143820225 471% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 11.7820224719 450% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.