Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
Some people argue who start pursuing a certain type of career from an early age will enjoy more their job and their life. I tend to disagree with this view because although this may increase people confidence and reduce confusion, there can be some drawbacks and other factors or events may be more important than the job.
When people enter the job market feeling of frustration and confusion can occur. This is because sometimes people are confused about what will be their role and if the job they are going to do is the job they want. In theory people who chose a job at an early age and continue with it when they are adult are deemed to be people who have always loved or dreamed of that job and therefore satisfied with it. In addition, those people my be less confused than others who are still unsure about their career in their adult age.
However, it would be too much to say that choosing a job at an early age and being committed with succeeding with it is a magic formula for success. Firstly, the job market is dynamic, so a field chosen 20 years ago may not employ so many people at the present. Secondly, ideas and ambition change, and some people are not happy to do the jobs they chosen when they were kids. Finally, job satisfaction depends on a number of other social factors such as friends and recreational activities. For example, a person who chose to study Economics but ended up with bad social connections may not find his life satisfying but at work and at home.
In conclusion, choosing a job at a young age may help people be less puzzled about their future, but that is not a guarantee that their
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: MY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'may be' or 'might be'?
Suggestion: may be; might be
...fied with it. In addition, those people my be less confused than others who are still...
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Line 13, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., but that is not a guarantee that their
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50836120401 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3115280032 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5102547924 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272447546797 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108026999646 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548000238471 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169630251425 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660923491857 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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