Students doing part-time jobs - advantages and disadvantages.
In modern life money is important factor in human lives. students are taking higher education to earn more money and they are doing part-time jobs to manage personal expanses. this essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of art-time job and therefore, will reach on final conclusion.
To start with, student leaving there homes for higher education. While taking education they are doing part-time job. Part-time job is actually very good thing for student who don't have good financial support. With the help of part-time they are able to manage personal expanses like mobile recharge, daily food and hostel bills. doing part-time job is not bad thing for students.
On the other-side, part-time job of students has many disadvantages . Few student doing part-time job for personal enjoy, they are not working to manage food and bills. In example, students from college working part-time and misusing this money for smoking and drinking wine, other using money to entertain girlfriend and friends. In America and Europe college students have bad habits of drugs and drinks compare to indian students. misuse of part-time job impacting in personal life as well as in study.
In conclusion, part-time jobs are very helpful. students should have to take care about misuse of money from part-time job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53000587059 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6182788203 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4666666667 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529102880442 0.242375264174 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226554343799 0.0925447433944 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122434996785 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375363389141 0.151781067708 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295847161833 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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