In many countries,the proportion of olde people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society ?
There are split opinion regarding elder person.Many people deem that in most of nations the proportion of senior citizen concstantly enlarged. While another group of thinkers support this tendency have more positive of refusal causes on the society.However,both has its own pros and corns therefore,before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed.
On the factor of statement, there are multiple factors to support that older people are important base of whole family. Aged the persons who are above the 60 to 70 year old,they are guiding their family in all the things according to their whole life experience. The foremost reason is that today's generation has new mindsets and sometime it's prove harmful for them, that's why old people are necessary for society and in individual family.
Another factor that attracts is that old people in their leisure time they help to their grandson in study,play with them indoor games, give them right path for their life,also provide them knowledge of our tradition and ancient culture. Moreover,senior citizen tied up their family together.
On the contrary, the lletter views suggest that older people are incapable to adopt a new technological things and modern culture, they always live like to according their past time and because of this their grandson do not talk with them and always ignore them.Besides this sometime aged people being burden on their family due to their bad habits and behaviour.
To summarise and gives my opinion, I would say that we have to always learned new things from old people,also I suggest that positive side of old people cannot be under estimated and solution of negative impacts should be improved situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23381294964 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76602800527 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5674542657 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17272271824 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676073969796 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423450603765 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965425192093 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415987046795 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.