The spread of multinational companies and increase in globalisation produce positive effects for everyone.
Although, many people deem that expansion of multinational corporation is convenient and it is also enlarge the globalisation and it has a positive influence on people and it is acceptable. I think in a reverse manner and agree to the given statement. My inclination is justifyin in the following paragraph.
Out of all the arguments, the strongest want to prove my view is, if multinational companies established their business in small state. This is to say as due to establishment of big company, it make magnigy price of other land who nearer and surrounded by company. A good example for this Maruti Suzuki multinational company in Bahucharaji (Gujarat). Beside this , it is also true that it make good standard of life for local people. By this I am in multinational company provide employment, whom they are graduated with and handsome score, but still victim of unemployment. so, in this case companies hire them and give employment and provide congenial life.
The other reason to prove my point is , with setup of multinational company , there will be other facilities are build up such as , restaurant and so on. In addition, the fact that in local regions the product of company easily available with convenient price. This is also logically acceptable.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the Mansioned support. The foremost argument they do is , if multinational companies settle in small state , it will demolish land of farming and make lack of lifespan sources. Moreover, companies make noise and air pollution and it occurs lot of disease.
Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that demolish yeild land by setuping of companies and my positive reason is that it gives employment, as well as compose the economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enlarged'.
Suggestion: enlarged
...orporation is convenient and it is also enlarge the globalisation and it has a positive...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...on people and it is acceptable. I think in a reverse manner and agree to the given statement. My in...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...due to establishment of big company, it make magnigy price of other land who nearer ...
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Suggestion: ,
...pany in Bahucharaji Gujarat. Beside this , it is also true that it make good stand...
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...core, but still victim of unemployment. so, in this case companies hire them and g...
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... The other reason to prove my point is , with setup of multinational company , t...
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...is , with setup of multinational company , there will be other facilities are buil...
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...upport. The foremost argument they do is , if multinational companies settle in sm...
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Suggestion: ,
...national companies settle in small state , it will demolish land of farming and m...
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Suggestion:
...ompanies settle in small state , it will demolish land of farming and make lack o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07903780069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0205604703 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4596599213 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193434423521 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581775413912 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500689427665 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980485301608 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024988880031 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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