In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Rising crimes across most of the countries are intimidating. This essay, talks about the problems like poverty, illiteracy and unemployment being the root cause and few solutions following the same.
Firstly, poverty plays a pivotal role with the increased unemployment and illiteracy, where a basic need fulfillment is difficult. Secondly, greedy to acquire wealth, irrespective of an economical background allows a person to indulge in anti-social activities. For example, theft, trafficking are illegal, still people commit them, as they are highly paid. Although, there are stringent laws enforced, looks like the criminals are escaping in the loopholes of the democracy.
Considering the illegal activities alarming across the state, the government has to enforce increasing employment for the needy, along with providing shelters for the homeless and free education. Furthermore, the city has to embark on CCTV installation, for surveillance on crimes that cost for generations to repair themselves from the damage. To illustrate, a video which showed a terrorist trying to bomb a famous city was caught and with the immediate action, lives of many innocents were saved. In addition, misdeed against women and children can be reduced by costing life of the criminals, so that they are afraid of committing.
In conclusion, fellowmen have to be taught to maintain peace and act humane for the development of a nation together. Violation of laws, have to be strictly chased and necessary actions have to be taken. Mainly, educating people to understand how important it is to become a good citizen and to be responsible to abide by the law and promote peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38167938931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01044159228 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664122137405 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5112634101 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902074927497 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279580856095 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028175015299 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051436411058 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378925471623 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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